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In these sluggish nights,
while in darkness I lie
exiled from the world of dreams
and into sleep unable to dive,
with great hope in my heart
I expect her dreadful, but still lovely appearance
and her bitter kiss on my forehead
which will cast me deep into the darkest slumber,
and just for that one night
I beg her to tear my mind away from this cruel world,
to give me sanctuary
within her soft embrace
in this darkest corner of my mind...
while in darkness I lie
exiled from the world of dreams
and into sleep unable to dive,
with great hope in my heart
I expect her dreadful, but still lovely appearance
and her bitter kiss on my forehead
which will cast me deep into the darkest slumber,
and just for that one night
I beg her to tear my mind away from this cruel world,
to give me sanctuary
within her soft embrace
in this darkest corner of my mind...
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A powerful poem, with a taste so sour ... but sweet. This poem is one of the few who reach deep within the heart of those who read it. It reaches into our corners that we try to hide before the world. Into our deepest, darkest corners ... one can literally feel the poem as it slithers down your mind.
It's dark, seductive, full of longing. The words you've chosen - perfect, they stress out the madness within the poem to its maximum potential.
Awesome poem.
It's dark, seductive, full of longing. The words you've chosen - perfect, they stress out the madness within the poem to its maximum potential.
Awesome poem.